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Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Fri Sep 13, 2013 10:57 pm
by AngryTaco
TheMagellan drew this up for me. Let me know what you think. I'm changing the finish line to white and were fixing the hand

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Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 12:03 am
by loxxrider
That hand tho... Haha looks good otherwise.

Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 12:36 am
by Mcstiff
I immediately picture a more simplified and abstract design with the name more integrated and the finish line transforming into the flag (the solid part of the line and the pole/handle make a good transition). IMO, the grass and the, zombie :P , hand are unnecessary. Wish I had time to draw something up (not trying to budge in, just for fun)

Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 2:04 am
by AngryTaco
yea were fixing the hand for sure. That didn't come out how I wanted it to but it's fine.

I'm thinking of taking the flag portion and making that a small logo

Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 7:04 am
by chaloux
I am not a graphic designer and I don't want to step on any toes so do whatever you want with this... but here's my 10 minute take. I realize you didn't ask for it but I really think you've just got too much going on there.

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Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 8:10 am
by vt10vt
That hand is kinda creepy... but I'm gonna go the other way and say make it the focal point and do something like this but with HPR

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Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:03 am
by loxxrider
When you say banner, I picture a website banner. I feel like everyone else is thinking this is for a company logo. Simple is better for the logo, but I think the banner can be more complex.

Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:44 am
by chaloux
I agree. I was thinking ad banner actually but even then you want more info than what I made. I'm just a minimalist

Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2013 11:04 am
by AngryTaco
loxxrider wrote:When you say banner, I picture a website banner. I feel like everyone else is thinking this is for a company logo. Simple is better for the logo, but I think the banner can be more complex.



Correct.

I was going to take the flag portion and possible make that the logo

Re: Need opinions on preliminary banner

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2013 1:59 am
by AngryTaco
You guys might be seeing this around BBQ....

:)

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